the song didnt start very well, actually is just because of the synth it looks like if you heard it empty and you just threw the first sound you find take your time to find something that fits, moving on, the lead isn't bad but you could have take advantage of it changing some sounds and mixing details,the synth that enters at 0:27 has to much volume and just eclipses the other sounds, something i like that its little but important its the break at 0:54 it takes out of the song any possibility of it being repetitive. This song could just be good or great depending on how much time you have been using fruity loops. You have good ideas but with experience you will learn how to take the maximum advantage of it, this song could be a lot better if you administrate the volume of each instrument and equalization, also, the fact of having a demo will only influence if your project its looong and detailed(because you can save it obviously and work on it for three months,not my case) i used FL DEMO for a year im only using xxl a month ago. What makes a producer great its the capability of showing emotions and handle of sounds in a song with any instrument( actually any sound even someone screaming), FL comes with MORE than needed to make a n1 hit in America (not kidding) so well...bye and good luke with future projects ;D 4/5 7/10
hey bud. check out my other songs. those were done with the Full XXL version. esecially Gazes of the Thousands. it has that emotion that your looking for.
i'm not at my home pc, so i just have the demo. but i understand what your saying. you can develop a project further if you can save it. i didn't want to download all the extra soundfont shit that's on my home pc, so i just went with what was there.
definetly not a surprise
cause this is an awesome song, every single review in your songs its just useless cause your pieces have no mistakes, and you dont just make melody that sound nice or good, it has felling you know, and thats something important, nice to see that what you do comes from the heart, i felt it while hearing the song, i really thank you for sending me the PM to hear your song cause i enjoyed it a lot 5/5 10/10. its going to my favs, really need some other stuff beside house or dance music.
PD: your music is soooooo awesome, that i am really thinking on not making more music, you just kill my self-esteem with this piece.(just joking)
the song is cool but the kick... its just like a bass doesnt sound like a kick, im not saying that the kick has too much bass, all im saying is that it needs to be a little more punchy, the build up-synths were a little bit weird for me but well i know thats just my taste. the song its repetitive i think it would be very cool to the style you are making to play with the bass filters something like deadmau5 you know. i liked also that little synth, i just cant describe but it gives the song personality. it is a good song. well think a bit you should reduce a little bit the bass. 5/5 9/10 keep the good work
Yeah i kinda know what you mean about the kick
ill work on it
Ha and i know what little synth your talking about
thanks for the good review =]
cool the final break its cool i liked it its very melodic not much to say cause im not a master of 8 bit but it is very original so yes its a 10/10 and a 5/5 for me. hope your friend likes this . keep the good work, and hear some of my stuff if you can.
i liked the intro,sounds very pro,i am very sure that the sample is the guitar don't know from where but i am very sure its that one, also i don't think this is dance i think its more like house because its not very melodic and the drums sound a little bit like tribal or Latin house. Its a great song, downloaded and voted 5/5 9/10 keep the good work and keep sampling (its not a crime) XD
Thanks a lot!!! It's funny because you inadvertently said that it should be "Latin House" and im Puerto Rican lololol! Maybe the influence from my blood secretly went into my music :D
well this is pretty good its incredible to see how every body its catching his sound you have a great song and you catched pretty well deadmau5 style but if you want to make some great stuff don't copy to much some body else make your own style, im not trying to say that this is bad or something. hear more electro house artist so you can catch another type of song structure the more artist you hear the better.send me a PM when the song is ready
I didn't try to copy him, I did some complex fiddling around with several synthesizer until I got something cool. The main reason it sounds similar to Deadmau5 is that it follows a real cadence instead of the dissonant electro house style that usually defines the tune.
w.o.w you have some great stuff right here, if you were just messing around... you should mess around more continuously. all the sounds were the right ones an everything sounded at the right moment.drums: 9.8 (its just perfect but you can always do it better it doesn't care how great you did it the drums needed that final 0.2 but i just don't have enough experience to tell you what they needed may be its a bad decisIon not giving it 10) melody: 10 pretty smooth and jazzy melodic instruments: 10 . the piano had great sound didn't sound to me like a generic piano may be because of the way you used it or because the way you played with its sounds, just cool ,the only complaint i have about the piano and the entire song is that some notes in the piano were played with a little bit of volume over the top and i had to reduce the volume cause was afraid to what could happen to my ears ( sorry it sounds that bad) maybe it was just my headphones. the bass was simple but thats what you need to make a good jazz/ambient song. the strings sounded sad and melancholic very good.and the most distinguished instrument in the song, the saxophone i must give the saxophone a 11 of 10 , it sounded like if you recorded it yourself that solo its to be heard a hundred times LOVED IT .really, it was deep and had good emotion, i heard the solo over and over and every time i liked it more.totally it is a great song you should be proud of what you have right here yo made my day happier. hope to hear more of you cause it will be a pleasure to review another of your songs. remember you can always improve and theres no perfection, you have talent and i will not regret of hearing this.thank you for asking me to hear your song it was a pleasure.keep up the good work downloaded and added to favorites 10/10 5/5 sorry for the short review. keep messing around keep doing your thing keep the good work.niceeee XD
Thank you for the excellent review.. I really appreciate all the time you took to pick the song apart. It has definitely given me things to think about for my future work. Again, thanks so much!
it was nice,i liked the melody (simple but great) all the synts you used,and the ...i liked almost everything.
what i did not like: the volume of the bass(i think it was a 3x osc) it was as a little bit to high for me,the kicks at the beginning had also not to much but some volume over the top at least for me(try to make a build up with those kicks) i have to accept that the criticism with the volume kicks its to much, But those little details make the difference
The song was great, i enjoyed it. again the only problem with the song its that some sounds have to much volume.
hope to hear more of you.¡KEEP THE GOOD WORK!
voted: 9/10 - 5/5
thank you for the feedback. I was going for a bit of the benassi style synth, but I'll take that into consideration next time I try to make a song with a strong bass synth. =) glad you enjoyed it
sounds very relaxing and smooth, i think this fits more in the house genre.with such a great song i don't know how his can have such a low score.you must have a lot of zero bombers over you.you could may be add to this some FX.Congrats,i downloaded it by the way.hope to hear more from you.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
this is a really good song,i cant say its better or worst than rd.2 because each one has his own style,i also think that the piano part of this one (rd.3) its better and more enjoyable than the one in rd.2.you also used very well the FX,and this sounds better done and more pro,i supose you have learned something in this 6 months since rd.2.one of my favorites songs and be sure this is going to my ipod.congrats,you should be proud of this.
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